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Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 17 part 1

szaleniec1000 Jun 25, 2011 00:42

When last we left the godawful excuse for a character pretending to be Hermione Granger in this fic, she'd vanished into thin air. And nothing of value was lost.

( Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 17 )

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Deserving Chapters 42-43

szaleniec1000 Jan 13, 2011 22:26

Welcome back to Deserving. Chapters 42 and 43 follow directly on from each other, so here they are as a double bill.

( Deserving Chapters 42-43 (NSFW) )

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Deserving Chapter 39

szaleniec1000 Jan 03, 2011 20:28

And here's 39, as promised. Complete with more buggery.
( Deserving Chapter 39 (NSFW) )

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Deserving Chapter 23 part 2

szaleniec1000 Oct 31, 2010 17:56

Oh, Harry. Be careful what you wish for. For your own sake, as well as the sanity of the reader.
( The rest of Chapter 23, NSFW )

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